Poetry Writing Learning Story

Poetry Writing Learning Story

In Term 3, I was learning to write different types of poems. 
The poems we learnt about have special features. 

One of the poems I learnt about was Acrostic 

It’s special features are Acrostic poems are easy to write. 
The name of the person, a place or a thing is written in
capital letters vertically down the page. Each capital letter
starts a new line of the poem. Each line describes the person,
place or thing.

I tried to write my own one.  

Here it is. 

Loving, kind lion’s sitting in the sun 

Increasing their body together  

On top of the cave is fat Pumba 

Now the lion cub is born  

Knowing it’s here  the new king is born

Independent king ready and away

Now Mufasa is dead   

Going to be king the lion cub said 

I want you to notice the interesting words I used 

I got some feedback on my poem which I  liked that it
describes the movie-Tyrell I think you should change the
  ready and away to ready to rule- whea vicky

I then tried to re-work my poem and now I’ve got this.

 Loving, kind lion’s sitting in the sun 

Increasing their body together  

On top of the cave is fat Pumba 

Now the lion cub is born  

Knowing it’s here  the new king is born

Independent king ready to rule

Now Mufasa is dead   

Going to be king the lion cub said